Over on his blog, Louis Carter has posted a wonderful entry
that reveals the creative process behind his art for our Dr. WTF?! 2012 story.
I know I'm biased, but his post makes for a bloody good read, and the more I
find out about his approach, the more I am blown away by his attention to
detail. Anyway, here's a bit about the genesis of the story from my
perspective, and a similar page-by-page commentary.
From the outset, despite a creeping residual paranoia that
someone out there would think I actually approved of his views, there was never
any doubt in my head that this new Doctor would be a Nazi. As such, the story
would be one of excess, with everything turned up to 11, featuring insanity on a grand scale. I later came up
with the idea that the Doctor liked Nazism so much because it reminded him of
Gallifrey - lots of middle-aged men dressing up in fancy costumes and issuing
edicts. (Indeed, there was a line in the first draft of the script to that
effect, but it got cut for space reasons, and 'cos editor Owen Watts rightly wanted
to limit references to 'proper' Who continuity / chronology.) So, if my
protagonist was a Nazi, who could his opponents be? There really wasn't much
choice - I had to go for the dialectic opposite of Fascism, in the form of Communism.
(I think I was also applying 'Battle' comic logic - when they ran 'Hellman of
Hammer Force' and 'Death Squad', two strips with German protagonists, the
characters generally ended up fighting the Russians, so that readers wouldn't
get irate if they saw them triumphing over the British.) Anyway, here's how it
all went:
Page 1:
Hauptmann Who is, in a very, very tangential way, kinda
sorta based on a guy who taught me Film Studies at university. He wasn't a Nazi
(as far as I am aware) but he did want to be seen as pretty rock 'n' roll,
despite being a kind of authority-figure, and occupying a not-particularly-rock
'n'roll position in life. He wore a long black leather jacket, jeans (with
turn-ups), DM boots and black t-shirts. The t-shirt here is one of many
examples where Louis improved on my ideas - I originally wanted an umlaut over
a question mark in blackletter font (as used by Motorhead for their logo.)
Louis instead shifted it underneath, where it also serves the function of
making the whole symbol look... well, slightly rude. I very specifically wanted
the character to actually be named 'Who' in the story -A) in tribute to the
Amicus Dr. Who movies B) in tribute to the William Hartnell story 'The War
Machines' ("Doctor Who is required... bring him here.") and C) 'cos 'Who'
is such an intrinsically funny sound.
Jimi Von Hendricks,
the Hauptmann's partner, went through a couple of script incarnations before I
was happy with him. He was inspired by a mod for the game 'Grand Theft Auto:
San Andreas'. The lead character in said game, CJ, is African-American, but
apparently white bigots, keen to enjoy a spot of gang-banging, couldn't
tolerate playing as a black man. Therefore, they created a modified version of
the game for themselves, in which the main character was white, but everything
else was the same. You have to laugh at these people, you really do. That was
the original concept for Jimi - that he
literally WAS Jimi Hendrix, but made white by Nazi science, so that racists
could enjoy rock 'n' roll without feeling like hypocrites. However, at some
level, the idea of visiting such an injustice upon Jimi started to offend me,
so instead I decided that the real Jimi's talent had been transplanted into the
body of a no-hope, poodle-permed glam-rocker instead (and Jimi disposed of.)
Louis took the transplant theme quite literally, hence the stitching on Jimi's
forehead. Given rock 'n' roll's undeniably black origins, it seemed suitably ironic that bigots woud want to appropriate it.
I do not know (or can't remember) why I picked the asteroid
belt to become Communist. I definitely wanted a celestial body to do so, showing
Hauptmann Who found the ideology so insidious that it could literally infect
inanimate objects on a massive scale. I discovered there were lots of different
types of asteroid, of different chemical composition, and then it all made sense.
The phrase 'reich und roll' was stolen from the band
Carnivore's song 'Jesus Hitler' (by the late Peter Steele of Type O Negative).
It was about what might happen if Jesus and Hitler both got reincarnated in the
same body. It was therefore the trigger for the 'Marley Luther Lenin' idea on
Page 3. (More of that when we get there.)
Page 2:
"You are the Masteroid!" is almost my favourite
line in the whole thing. As previous blog posts may have indicated, I am easily
amused by my own wordplay.
Germania - Many will be aware that Hitler did plan to
reconstruct Berlin as Welthauptstadt (World Capital) Germania, designed by
architect Albert Speer. A few elements of this reconstruction project were
successfully completed, but the fortunes of war pretty much put an end to it.
Not here!
World War Minus One and the Forever-Fuhrer: Well, if you had
time-travel, why not win wars before they start, therefore preventing them from
ever happening, in some ridiculous temporal paradox? (So much for no triumphing over the British then.) Likewise, I could imagine
that Hitler would have found some way to exist concurrently in multiple
different forms, like some crazy eternal version of the triple-goddess Morrigan
from Irish mythology. Of course, the Former-Fuhrer was just a baby, the
Flux-Fuhrer was in disarray, and the Future-Fuhrer dead, so every incarnation
epitomised a sense of helplessness. Some people don't like Hitler being used as
a figure of fun, but personally, I think relentless mockery is probably the
best way to demean his memory.
Page 3:
Marley Luther Lenin was originally just Martin Luther Lenin,
on the fairly obvious basis that the ultimate enemy of Hauptmann Who would have
to be both non-white, pro-equality, and a Communist. Bob Marley was added to
the mix for yet another musical angle, to allow me to give the character
dreadlocks with impunity, and to bang in some more excess.
"Never wear anything that panics the cat." - This
is my favourite line in the story. I originally just wanted to have the
Future-Fuhrer give some completely irrelevant fashion advice (I think he's gone
senile), and then I stumbled upon this P.J. O'Rourke quote.
Einstein and Laika - Einstein was certainly no fan of Nazism
or capitalism, and was accused of being a Communist on more than one occasion.
He was definitely a socialist. As for why his head is floating in space, I am
convinced this hails from one of my frequent influences, cartoonist Gary
Larson, who once drew the crew of the Starship Enterprise trying to cope with
the floating head of Zsa Zsa Gabor. As for the canine pilot, well, I like dogs,
basically. I am full of nothing but total and utter contempt for those that
took a lovely little dog like Laika and shot her into space to die. I'd shoot
the bastards into space myself, given the chance. So here she is, salvaged from
an alternate timeline and still loyal to a regime that is happy to sacrifice
her yet again for their own ends. No matter who's in charge or what the
ideology, dogs (and nature in general) always get the short straw (look at
Hitler's dog Blondie) - but dogs love us irrespective.
"Now there's a novelty!" is one of comedian Eric
Morecambe's less-prominent catchphrases, coined by writer Eddie Braben. I often
feel the temptation to slip lines or paraphrased lines from 'Morecambe and
Wise' into my scripts.
I sort of think of this as the 'Yellow Submarine' page.
(It's Jimi's trousers that do it.) To my eyes it is probably Louis's greatest
triumph in the whole story. I think the way he turns panels four and five into
a beyond-the-panel-limits free-floating psychedelic experience is so much
cleverer and more fitting than anything I'd have come up with. It expertly
conveys the nature of existence before the regular rules of existence kicked in.
The idea of time-travelling to the Big Bang (and calling it 'Event One') is a
direct lift from Dr. Who - 'Castrovalva', one of my favourite Who stories.
"That didn't happen, Jimi!" - The odd things is,
because he can time-travel and has created an alternate timeline, it may not
have done. But he's probably just in denial.
Page 5:
Too much dialogue as I struggle to cram everything in. And
another Motorhead reference! ('Eat the rich!') Well, Lemmy is known for
collecting Nazi memorabilia.
The final panels. Yes, quite. I am only partially to be credited (or
blamed) for these. Louis took something implicit (the homoerotic friction
between the two leads, and the associations implicit in the phrase 'Give free
vent to your love for me!') and, well, less ran with it, more hit Mach 3! Here
is the script as was originally written (the dialogue is the same):
Hauptmann
Who points commandingly at Jimi, who obliges by jamming on his guitar and
singing of his devotion to the Hauptmann. Jimi should be throwing some kind of
rock god shapes as he does so, while in the background the primal atom throbs
away and the kaleidoscopic primordial void creates hallucinogenic patterns,
like some atmospheric sound-to-light programme.
You will notice the lack of nudity, quasi-dimensional
snogging, stereo-genitalia or singular spherical objects of a non-primal-atom
nature. Basically, I wanted 'em to go out on a song, and use the famous Hendrix
mondegreen in the process. A private rock'n'roll concert at the dawn of time -
what could be more overblown? But Louis... naughty, naughty Louis wanted to
show us what 'free vent' really means. As a result, both my Dr. WTF?! scripts
now end with the main character about to indulge in acts of carnality. But
let's be clear - this is the kind of collaboration I like. Er... not
pre-historical misbehaviour, but where the artist takes the writer's script and
gives free vent to his own ideas. I take it as a massive compliment that Louis
felt the story was worth putting his own stamp on in such a way. Didn't stop my
jaw dropping when I read the thing, mind!
And that's your lot. This was one of my favourite comic
collaborations, because Louis brought so much to it, and gave it a colourful beauty
greater than it probably deserves. A word (or several) also needs to be said for Owen Watts's lettering - I bloody love that man's sound effects! (Oh, and several more words need said for that man's remarkable skill in organising and putting together the whole smashing anthology!) Hope you enjoyed the story, or were at least suitably disturbed.
